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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 21 2005, 05:09 PM (196 Views) | |
| blabs | Feb 21 2005, 05:09 PM Post #1 |
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He came to save us by blabs Messiah… He came… He saw… And He saved our souls… He suffered… He moaned… And in the end, He died… And now we shalln’ hide… For the Lord, Jesus was our Savior! For the Lord, Jesus was our Savior! And now…we abide… In God’s laws.. And now…we think about the one..who died.. Chorus: For us, Jesus died to… Forgive sin… For us…He wanted us to believe in… Faith, and miracles, and Him… Men: He’s our Savior and our Lord.. Women: (Echoe) Men: He died for us.. All: Oh, Jesus.. For us, He died to fogive our sins.. For us He died to bring us faith… And grace…oh, oh, oh………… For the Lord, Jesus was our Savior! For the Lord, Jesus went into my heart! And it’ll nev-er depart… For the Lord, Jesus saved us… No more sins like wounds with puss… Jesus died to save us…. Jesus died to save us… He died…to save us… Save us.. Save us(died to) save us… Women: He saved us.. Men: He saved us.. All: And now we may be one… Till the world is done, For: He is Messiah, Our Savior, Our King… And He is higher… Than more that we can dream… For he is the alpha(alpha) Alpha..(alpha…) And omega… HE IS THE BEGGING AND THE END! Oh, Messiah… Messiah.. Messiah! Messiah… He came… He saw… And He saved our souls… |
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| Aka Tolken | Feb 21 2005, 05:10 PM Post #2 |
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I can't hear it. 
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| alamir | Feb 21 2005, 07:40 PM Post #3 |
Electricity is just Organized Lightning.
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lool ^^^^^ But seriously, posting song lyrics doesn't have the same effect as posting poems. But if I had to judge, it's not that original.. other than this part:
I thought it was wierd that you chose the word "Begging" over "Begining" ..unless that was a typo.. (in which case you forgot 4 letters!) ..but if it wasn't a typo ...it's a pretty interesting verse. Is omega the last letter in the greek alphabet? Did you chose greek b/c it was closer to the original language of the bible than english? ...that may be wise, but since the rest of the song is in english, there are many cases where you typed letters that come after Omega... I just came out of my poetry class... so sorry if I'm over-analyzing. |
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| Special Forces | Feb 22 2005, 12:47 PM Post #4 |
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*Sigh* Apparently you don't know the Bible as much as other do. (No offense of course). First it is beginning I find very weird ways of spelling that and it's a typo. Yes omega is the last letter in the greek alphabet. It says in the Bible God is the Aplha and Omega. He didn't pull these letters out of nowhere. He/she (Not sure I realized I typed he a lot) just wrote this song using basic Bible knowledge. Good job on writing the song by the way, I know how difficult it may be by writing a song. |
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