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| Tweet Topic Started: May 15 2005, 07:45 PM (699 Views) | |
| Chop Top-ZNS | May 15 2005, 07:45 PM Post #1 |
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Lick My Plate
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MY SCRIPT AND VERY PLEASED ABOUT IT.....COPYWRITED!!!! AND CURRENTLY BEING VIEWED BY TWISTED PICTURES *NEEDS TO BE NAMED* OPENING DIALOGUE 15 Years ago, on a normal day, a group of tourists on their way back from holiday encountered something that they would never have even dreamed of. A small group of savages terrorized the group and decided on their deaths in strange ways. The psychotic amily were never found but will never be forgotten. OPENING CREDITS In an airport, passengers of flight 134 was getting off of the plane. A very weird looking man made way to his luggage, his bag had strange things written on it, and had what looked like blood and bones attached to it. He made his way through security. The man started walking through customs without saying anything. A security guard runs in front of him. Guard: Hey, have you got anything to declare? Man: Yeah, I do. I can declare that I have nothing to declare and your in my mulleting way. The Guard looks at him with disgust and steps aside. Man: Thank you. As the guard walks away you can hear him muttering “Ignorant ass-hole” The Man walks outside and gets aboard his bus. While he is on his bus ride to his destination, a late teenager looks at his bag. Teen: Weird bag, are you into that Voodoo stuff? Man: He he, no, I just kind of like it. Its my kind of style, as if, as if it’s a symbol of death. The Teen gives a small laugh as if she knew he was joking. Teen: Names Jessie. Man: I’m Corky. They shake hands. Jessie: So, what do you keep in that bag anyways, looks so strange. Corky: Yup, awfully strange bag alright, as if I keep limbs inside you know what I mean, ha ha. Jessie (In a very humorous way) : Your funny Corky, he he, your not some crazy murderer are you, he he. Corky (Also Humorously): Hmm, if I was a murderer, don’t worry, you would be the last person that I would kill ha ha ha. Jessie: So where you heading? Corky: I’m heading home. Jessie: Whereabouts you live. Corky: He he, just some quiet little home in the woods. Jessie: You live alone? Corky: No, got my brothers, cousins. Jessie looks at his bag again. Jessie: Is that blood? Corky: That, oh yeah, blood, not anyone else’s though, that’s my blood, got into a fight with my brother about who got to keep the little son mullet. Jessie just kind of looks away from his with a sour face. Corky: Anyways, I’m the first stop, specially requested. Jessie: Why? Corky: Family business. Bus Driver: Hey, Ted Bundy get your ass over here! Corky: You mean me? Bus Driver: Yeah I mean you, here now! Corky walks down the bus to the driver. Bus Driver: You gave me these directions to your place, now I don’t see no road here. Corky: I know, I want you to go around there. Bus Driver: Why? Corky: You see that dirt track, that’s what my brothers call the road. Now I aint walking that mullet so you better take me down there. Bus Driver: Yeah man, ill go down there, but there’s one problem. Corky: And what might that be tubby. Bus Driver: Your right beside me, so get your ass back into your seat! Corky heads back to his seat. Jessie: You ok? Corky: Yeah I’m ok, just this trailer trash son mullet pushing me around. They eventually arrive. At this strange area there was a large house that looked destroyed on the inside and has almost all the paint stripped from the outside. Jessie: THAT’S your home? Corky: Nothin to brag about, but its home. Corky gets off the bus. Corky: You just wait there. Bus Driver: You hurry your ass up Al Capone cos I aint got all day! Corky enters his house and comes back out with a strange group of characters that were holding knives and axes. Corky (Shouting): There’s lunch! Get them boys! The group storm towards the bus and the driver quickly starts the bus up again. He tries to close the bus door but one of the brothers sticks his hands in the door and pulls it open. They all run into the bus and start beating the passengers while screaming in very weird ways. They hit people across the head with hard objects and knocking them out. Corky is watching it all from the outside. Corky: Where is Yeeha? Yeeha!!! A very hyper man runs out of the house and runs to Corky. Yeeha: YEEEEEEHA!!!!!!! Corky: We got another load brother! Start collecting! Yeeha: YEEEHA!!!! I’ll get them Corks just watch me!!!! YEEEEHA!!!! Yeeha storms on the bus. Corky: He he, AND TAKE MOST OF THEM ALIVE, I WANNA TRY THE WHEEL!!!! Corky starts walking away into the home but then turns around and walks on the bus. He walks over to his seat and takes his briefcase. When walking back off the bus, a knocked out woman lies on the floor in front of him. Corky: Oops, excuse me madam. He walks into the house and you get a view of the hot sun on the horizon and all you can hear is the terror that is taking place on the bus. Going further on inside the house, Corky is standing talking to his cousin Keel. Corky: How many has Yeeha brought in. Keel: Bought 23, there’s still more being brought in tho, Bix is taking the survivors down into the dungeon. Corky: What about my wheel? Keel: Disembowelment, decapitation, hard hits, their all up there. Corky: I wanna try it out ASAP so tell those two mulleters to hurry up with them bodies. How many survivors did we salvage anyways? Keel: We got about 10, 5 of them is out cold. Yeeha enters the room with a dead man over his shoulder, he starts doing wrestling moves with the corpse. Corky: What in gods name you doing boy? Yeeha takes no attention and continues fighting with the dead man. Yeeha: He’s down, up top, down again, slam slam slam, one, two, three!!! I win! WOOOO!!!!! Ride them up Soldier!!! Keel: Its actually ride em up cowboy. Yeeha: You saying I aint got the material!!! Ill take you down right now Gary!!! Keel pulls out a knife and grabs Yeeha and slams him up against the wall, with his knife at Yeeha’s throat. Keel: You call me Keel, or I swear I will cut your head clean off of your neck. My old man named me Gary and since I killed that sonofamullet I told you all not to call me that. Now do you understand me!!! Yeeha: He he, your head bobs up and down when you shout, kind of like a bobble head, I got to put you on the front of my truck so I can see you bob and bob and bob until you blush to death. Would you like that??? Keel puts the knife away and throws Yeeha to the floor. Keel: Corky, you do anything to your brother in the past? Cos I swear, it looks like a horse kicked him on the head. Corky: Naw, when I killed mama he tried to stop me, so I hit him on the head with a sledge hammer. He don’t remember it though. Yaaha: You did what to who’s mama? Corky: Shut up you little dung beetle and get that fat ass into the dungeon. Corky makes his way to the dungeon. He heads down the stairs. The dungeon was a very weird place, there was blood on the walls and pictures of what seemed to be old victims of the family. Corky enters the prisoners dungeon and all the people who are tied up in the room start screaming. Everyone: AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Corky: AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! HELP US…..HELP US!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! Will you all shut up!!!! From now on, all of you are my guests, my name is none of your mulleting business and if you want to address me you may as well not waste your breath because I’m not going to do a damn thing for anyone. Some of you will be wondering, why are we here, what does he want, when will he let us go well I got news for y’all. You aint leaving this place, you will all die here and probably end up being one of the little sausages on my plate tomorrow at around 5.39pm. If you are asking yourself, how is he going to kill us and why then I have another answer, but don’t ask me, ask the wheel. BIX!!! THE WHEEL!!! Bix storms into the room with a large item that had a bloody cloth over it. Corky: Let them see it! Bix tears the sheet from the wheel and underneath there was a large metal wheel with “Wheel of Mis-Fortune” engraved into it. There was several options on the wheel that said methods of death. Corky: This is your new fate, we will pick one of you and we will spin this wheel, no-matter what happens, you will die the way that this wheel says so! Man in the crowd: What, are you insane, you’re a freak, what did we do to you. Corky: What’s that? Did I hear a volunteer? Come on up here. Bix get that mullet. Bix grabs the man and pulls him up front. Corky: What’s your name son? Man: I’m Johnath… Corky (Interrupting): NO ONE CARES ABOUT YOUR NAME!!!!! People this is where the fun begins, well maybe the fun for us but for you its kind of depressing, HAHAH! Spin the wheel! Bix spins the wheel and the man struggles to get away but Bix overpowers him. Corky looks over at the crowd and sees Jessie, he winks at her and puts on a psychopathic smile and sticks his tongue out. The wheel eventually stops. Corky: Well well, we got a hard hit here, go and get Keel, I think he will want this. Bix punches the man to the ground and leaves the room and Corky turns to the man and grabs him. Corky: So, what do you think this means? Nothing to you really cos your gonna die, I don’t know maybe a sledgehammer will do the trick. Keel enters the room with a sledgehammer and without thought he quickly smacks the man in the head with a sledgehammer. He rapidly hits him when he is on the ground. Corky: Proof ladies and gentlemen that we will have NO mulleting about!!! I will see y’all later. Oh and were gonna lock the door so there will be no need in trying to escape. Night night and we hope to eat y’all tomorrow, c’mon Keel, get the wheel. Keel gets the wheel and leaves the room. Corky: Oh and Jessie, you will be the last one that I kill, I AM a man of my word, HEHAHAHAHA!!!! Corky leaves the room and all you can hear is him screeching along tge corridor singing a song that doesn’t even exist. Unknown Voice: Have they gone? A beaten up looking man appears out of the darkness in the cell, he has blood on his jumper and lots of cuts on his stomach that have pierced through his clothes. Jessie: Who are you? Man: Do you know why they kept me? Jessie shakes her head. Jessie: What’s your name? Man: They captured me, I just picked him up and he told me to take him here and he, he hit me with this bone and he took me down here and they….they did things to me! Jessie: What is your name? Man: I’m Gunner. Jessie: What happened, did they…what did they do to you. *FLASHBACK* Gunner: I was doing my rounds in my cab, like I always do, this man was lying down on the sidewalk, I got out to help him, I asked him to take me to a hospital but he just wanted to go home. (It shows what is happening while he is explaining it) Gunner: He never acted like he was injured, he just told me to take him here and he hit me on the head with this bone when he was in the backseat. That’s all that I can remember. *END FLASHBACK* Jessie: What have they done to you? Man from the Crowd: Hey, who cares what they did to him! Why don’t you think about what there gonna do to us huh!! Did that slip your mind!! Woman in Crowd: He’s right, we gotta get out of here!! Gunner: You cant! I tried everything! The doors locked, aint no windows and they definitely aint got no fire exit. The whole house is booby-trapped. Jessie: Its ok, its ok. Man from Crowd; How the hell is it ok!!!??? You heard him, were all gonna die because of that mulleting wheel!! I don’t care what you guys do but I’m out of here! The man charges to the locked door and rams it, the door swings open. The man has a slight look of happiness on his face and everyone in the room acts relieved but before the chance to escape came around a fire axe came swinging from above the door and hit the man in the face, a kind of scream alarm goes off and Yeeha comes running down the stairs. Gunner: I hate when that happens. Yeeha: Corky, Corky!!! Quick the fridge is open!!! Corky comes storming into the room with a horrible look on his face. Corky: Well…..well well well well well. Looks like we got some guts in this crowd. Now call me paranoid but I think that you all want to escape? Does it not feel good knowing that you all goin to die? Well I think we got to finish the job right now. Get the wheel. Another man stands up and runs as fast as possible out of the room. You hear a very slight jerk and blood splat. Keel comes back into the room with the man, the man has a meat hook through his throat. Keel: HA HA!! We got us some fast food here Corky. Corky: Shut up you piece of mullet. Yeeha comes back in with the wheel. Corky: I think we will start with, you! The fat mulleter!! Corky points to a chubby man and Keel goes over and drags him to the wheel. Corky: Well, what should we do to you, being a fat ass man, how about disembowelment! Fat Man: No!!! Please don’t disembowel me please!!! *Whimper Whimper* PLEASE!!!!! Corky: Don’t ask me, ask the wheel. Yeeha spins the wheel. Yeeha: Round and round, Round and round, Round and round!!! The wheel stops on quick decapitation. Fat Man starts whimpering. Corky: mullet this mullet! Corky goes to the wheel and turns it to disembowelment. Fat Man: AAAHHHHH!!! PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE NO!!!!!! Corky: Let Bix do it. Yeeha and Keel hit the man across the head with a bone and drag him out of the room. Corky: I cant be bullmulletted doing all this, there’s too many of ye. Im just gonna finish it right now! Gunner springs up and grabs Corky, they struggle on the floor. Gunner: GO!!! 4 of the prisoners (4 men) and Jessie run out of the room but before anyone else could leave Corky hits Gunner. He quickly runs out of the room and pulls a rope, before you know it, a high amount of flames cover the room and everyone starts burning, before Gunner got caught in the flames he ran out of the room and attacked Corky. Corky: You some balls you little son of a mullet. But you know that even if you get past me, you aint going nowhere. Gunner: Like I give a mullet! Gunner grabs Corky and throws him into the room of fire and you hear Corky scream over the other people who were burning. CUTS TO JESSIES SIDE OF THE STORY Jessie: Come on! They start roaming around the very dark area trying to find an exit. They stop at a corner and they look around the corner very slightly and they can see that fat man being disembowelled by Yeeha and Bix. Man 1: Let’s just get out of here fast, and then run until we see a road. Yeeha turns his head. Yeeha: Hey! The food is running!! Get them Bixie Wixie HEHAHEHA!!! Bix and Yeeha run towards the five people and scream to scare them. Jessie and the 4 men start to run. Yeeha: Run run as fast as you can, you cant escape me Im the cannibal man!! HEHAHEHA!!!! They continue running and get to a dead end. Jessie: mullet!!!! Just as Yeeha and Bix were about to get to them, Gunner shot from nowhere and tackled them to the ground. Gunner: JUST RUN!!!!!! Jessie and the men start to run away. Yeeha: I always hated this son of a mullet!! Yeeha pulls a small bloody knife out of his pocket and sticks it into the side of Gunner. Gunner stands up in great agony and backs off. Yeeha: Hey Bix, we got a bleeder, HEHAHEHA!!!! He got a little hole in his side so I can stick a straw inside! Bix does not reply. Yeeha: Bix, you alright bro?…bro…BRO!!!! Yeeha looks at Bix, he had been tackled to the ground and his own blade had been forced into his own head when he hit the ground. Yeeha: BIX BIX!!!!! YOU WAKE UP YOU LITTLE mullet!!!!! Gunner pulls the knife out of his side and stares at Yeeha. Yeeha: You…killed him you BASTARD!!!! Yeeha runs towards the speechless Gunner and Gunner sticks the knife into Yeeha. Yeeha: ARGH!! DAMMIT!!! THIRD TIME THAT’S HAPPENED THIS WEEK!!! Yeeha pulls the knife out of his chest and licks the blood off of it. Gunner stares at Yeeha with a shocking look. Yeeha: What? Just because its your own brand, it don’t mean it don’t taste good HAAAAA!!!!! Gunner charges at Yeeha but Yeeha moves out the way and grabs Gunner, he sticks his fingers right into Gunners wound and twists. Gunner: AAAARRRGGGHHH!!!!!!!!! Yeeha: Hehe, hurts…don’t it!!! Gunner: NOT AS MUCH AS THIS IS GONNA HURT YOU MOTHAmulletER!!! Gunner pulls back, screams with pain then dives for the knife, he grabs it and Yeeha runs towards him but the Gunner sticks the knife right into Yeeha’s testicles. Yeeha: AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Yeeha struggles with pain and Gunner grabs him and rapidly hits his head off of the wall until there didn’t seem to be any life left. *Back to Jessie* Jessie and the men are running along the corridor when a very bloody and badly burned Corky comes around the corner and grabs one of the men. Jessie: Let him go, everyone else run!!! Corky: Sure run, but that wont do this tasty son of a mullet any good. But hey, what will. Corky leans the man back and takes a large bite out of his throat. Jessie: AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! The man starts choking up lots of blood and Corky keeps trying to catch the spitting blood in his mouth. Corky: Don’t scream babe, he cant talk with his mouth full in this house. Jessie kicks Corky in the testicles and starts to run. Corky: ARGH!!!! You cant keep running!!! YOU CANT KEEP RUNNING!!! Jessie runs through endless dark corridor and stops. She hears moaning. Jessie: Hello? She keeps hearing the moans. Jessie: WHO IS THERE!!! UNKNOWN VOICE: Help me, help me….HELP ME!!! AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! A huge flashlight turns on and holding it is Keel. He has a fire axe in his hand and he starts walking down the corridor. All you can see is the light from his torch. Jessie: AAAHHHHHH!!!!! Keel: RUN RUN RUN RUN AHAHAHHAHAHA!!!! Jessie runs down the corridor and everything goes silent, all that she could hear from now on was slow shuffling and the axe screeching across the floor. She stops running and starts walking backwards slowly, the screeching eventually stops and she keeps walking backwards, she bumps into something and stops, she starts breathing really heavily and turns around. The exact second that she turns around all the lights turn on and standing in front of her was Yeeha, he had large blood stains on his head struggled to move. He screams loudly in a voice that anyone would fear and jumps on her, he beats into her and kicks her. Keel is walking slowly towards them both, all you can hear is Yeeha laugh and Jessie scream in pain. Corky then appears and grabs Yeeha. Corky: What the mullet do you think you are doing!? Yeeha: I was killing the mullet. Corky: You mulleting leave her alone, she’s mine…but not yet. Keel take her to our…special place. Keel throws his axe to the ground and grabs Jessie. Corky: Where’s Bix? Yeeha shakes his head but still has a psychopathic smile on his face. Corky: WHAT THE mullet HAPPENED!!?? Yeeha: The ass-hole that we got in the room, he got out, he killed Bix. Corky: You better be pulling my alligator boy. Yeeha: No joke Corks, he gone. Yeeha still has a evil smile on his face. Corky: He gone? Yeeha: Yes. Corky: Dead? Yeeha: Uhuh. Corky: And your standing there smiling!!!!!! And where were you during all this!!! Yeeha: On the ground. Corky punches Yeeha in the face and walks down the corridor following Keel. ************************************ *Gunners side of the story* Gunner is walking down a hallway with the knife that he had been ttacked with earlier. He is looking around every corner. He sees 4 shadows come around the corner so he hides, the shapes head over in his direction. He jumps out at them with his knife. Man: WHOA WHOA!!! CALM DOWN ITS US!! Footsteps start coming closer. Gunner: Get behind here. Yeeha and Keel are walking past holding an unconscious Jessie while Gunner and the 4 men hide. Yeeha: So where’s your old man these days? Keel: Dead, I killed him. Yeeha: Oh? HAHAHAHHAH!!! They go past. Gunner: We got to get to Jessie. Man: Hell no, we gotta get out of here. Gunner: You wanna try, go ahead and try. But you will probably die like the rest of us, were all gonna die but we can at least try and get out of here as a team, but we need Jessie. Man: mullet you, I’m outta here. Gunner: NO, YOU GONNA STAY HERE WHILE I GO GET JESSIE!! Gunner runs out but as he does, Yeeha jumps out behind the four men and starts stabbing them all. Yeeha: I thought I smelled mullet and look who I find…I got my balls back….STAPLES ARE YOUR FRIENDS!!!! Gunner jumps at Yeeha and the knife drops, Gunner punches Yeeha in the face and chokes him, Yeeha just laughs and grabs Gunner back, he gets on top of him and starts double elbowing his face, he keeps laughing. He gets off of him and goes for his knife but Gunner stands up and tackles him against a wall that was beside a stain glass window. Yeeha turns the case again and pins Gunner against the wall. He chokes him for ages. Gunner looks at a rope that was hanging from he ceiling and grabs it, he wraps it around Yeeha’s head and tightens, he keeps tightening until Yeeha lets go, he then ties it together and throws Yeeha out of the window, Yeeha falls out and the rope breaks his neck, he just hangs there in the rain. Gunner: Another one down, mullet! Meanwhile Keel is carrying Jessie down the stairs taking her to what Corky calls the special place. He drops her in the room. Keel: We should just save us the time and slit your throat you mullet. You caused us lots of hassle already, Corky seems to like you, maybe he will let you die with honour, either way, you gonna die. Jessie: *cough cough* mullet you creep. She spits in his face. Keel: If Corky didn’t exist, I’d kill you right now. He walks out of the room and slams the door, you hear it lock. She runs up to the door and rapidly bangs it. Jessie: Help me!!!! SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!!! *Gunner again* Gunner is walking down the steps and he sees the front door. Gunner: It’s the way out! Gunner runs through the door into freedom, he starts running out as fast as he can but then stops. He looks back and hears Jessie screaming. He looks to the ground and shakes his head. Gunner: I’m gonna hate myself for this. He turns back and starts running to the house but while he is running, he falls through a trap in the floor and falls into a large area of water. *Corky and Keel are talking outside the special place* Corky: Where the mullet is Yeeha! Keel: Beats me, back there he heard some noises and gone off to check, he’s probably having some fun. Corky: Well what about the mullet, you sure she’s not gonna get out this time? Keel: Sure, what you wanna do with her. Corky: I say we put her in the swimming suit and drown her ass. Keel: You not wanting something more, gruesome? Corky: Naw, she proved worthy of a descent death. You can still hear Jessie scream in the background. Corky rams the door open, he is holding a rope and Keel is holding Duct tape. Corky: We got a surprise for you darling. You gonna die like a fish swimming backwards. You going into the Poseidon Adventure. Keel: I always liked that movie. They start tying her up and she screams and struggles. Corky: You stay still now, we aren’t going to let you go, don’t worry, you gonna stay, your fine. They put the ropes around her hands and stick the duct tape around hetr mouth. Keel: Ill take her, you ready the carriage! WOO HOO! Keel picks her up and takes her out the room. *Later on* They are going through the house and Keel enters a very green room. Corky is standing there with a coffin at his feet. Corky: Put her in! Keel starts putting her in the coffin and she struggles and try’s to scream. Corky: CALM THAT mullet DOWN!!! Keel smacks her in the head and squeezes her in the box. Corky: Ready, I will not forget you my little rag doll. 1...2...3! Keel closes the coffin and stomps on it, it falls through a very thin layer of floor and it falls into the water. You can see Jessie inside it struggling to get out, she is trying to straighten her knees to boot the coffin open but it is no use. Water starts filling the coffin and she starts screaming with the tape over her mouth. *Shows Corky and Keel again* Corky: I liked that mullet. Keel: Bit of a pain though. Corky: Shut the mullet up! *Jessie again* The water is filling up quite far and it reaches over her face. She is drowning and she struggles and struggles to get away but it is no use. The top of the coffin starts cracking and someone’s hand starts to break through it, all of a sudden the whole top of it come off and a man pulls her out, it was Gunner! He pulls the tape from her mouth and she starts coughing. He unties her. Gunner: You ok? Jessie: You came back for me. Gunner: later, we got to get out of here now. We have to find an exit. They starts walking around the area, under the ground in this watery area there was very dirty and muddy water. The walls were stone and spiky and it smelled awful. They were walking around and they saw a tunnel that lead to light. Jessie: The exit! Gunner: Come on…. Just as they started going up the tunnel, a creepy looking man started emerging from the water. They never noticed him and started going up the tunnel. The man leaped on Gunner and hit his head off of the wall. It turned to Jessie and started slowly walking towards her. It got really close and smelled her. She stood there staring at it with great fear in her eyes. It smelled more and leaned its neck back, opened its mouth and just before it pulled forward to bite her. A sharp shard of wood came through its mouth. It fell to the ground and Gunner stood behind it with blood on his head where it had been hit off of the wall. Gunner: Now, get up there now!!! They start running up the tunnel towards the light and manage to get out. Jessie: Were free! Come on, we got to find the road. As soon as they start moving, Corky and Keel run out of the house after them. Jessie: Run!!!! Gunner: mullet!!! Keel goes to smack Gunner but he ducks but is then hit by Corky and Gunner falls to the ground. They start running to Jessie and she turn around and runs. She trips up and they catch up to her. They pick her up and both grab her. Corky: I should have killed you first mullet!!!! Keel: But we had to lose family for you. Corky: You had to turn our lives, kill our Bix. Keel: The ass-hole killed Yeeha!!!! Corky: And now…its your turn!!!!!! Both: AHAHHAHAHHAHAHH!!!!!! Corky: Hey, Keel, is that out truck? A pickup truck from the house races towards them and Jessie bites Keel and Corky and jumps out of the way. The car hits them both and they go over the top of the pick-up truck. Gunner: Its me, get in!! GET IN NOW!!! Just before Jessie could get in the truck, Keel and Corky jump on the back and reach through to Gunner, they scratch his face and hit his head, he starts shouting in pain and starts to drive away around the forest area. Jessie: NOOOOOO!!!! Gunner try’s to keep control of the truck but a knife comes through his face but his foot stays on the pedal. The truck starts heading at full speed towards a tree. Keel: CORKY!!!! LOOK!!! Corky: mullet!!!!!!! Boom! The truck hit’s the tree and explodes with Corky and Keel on it. Jessie: GUNNER!!!!!!!!! GUNNER!!!!!!!!!!!!! She screams and starts running down the dirt road. She finds the road, it passes through night and she keeps following the main road, looking for any driver to go past. Eventually she sees a coach. She jumps in front of it and it stops. The driver comes out. Driver: Are you ok? Jessie: You gotta get me to a doctor, please, get away from here!!! Driver; Come on now, get inside. She gets inside and sits in one of the empty seats on the bus. She starts falling asleep. *AFTER SHE WAKES UP* She wakes up and notices that the bus is going down a dirt road. She panics and runs to the driver. Jessie: Stop!!! WHERE ARE YOU GOING!!! Driver: Calm down there, I’m just taking that man over there home. She looks around the bus and sees what seems to be a psycho looking at her, he waves at her and she screams. She looks out of the front window and sees the house that she was being held at the day before outside the window, some freaks were standing outside. The camera frames into the face of a burned man. It was Corky and he stares at the oncoming bus and sees Jessie. Jessie: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Corky puts on a very smug smile and nods his head and starts laughing! All you can hear is Jessie screaming as the bus nears the house that she was tortured in. THE END! |
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| alamir | May 15 2005, 07:52 PM Post #2 |
Electricity is just Organized Lightning.
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I'm not a big fan of the horror genre, and haven't viewed many. (Not even those Freddy Krueger ones) ...but I can help you by suggesting you get a book like "SCript Writing for Dummies" ..it's very helpful in writing scripts, for example, instead of writing AHHH AHHH you should be writing (Screaming) it will make it more professional looking, if you're thinking of submitting it to someone. Does anyone know any online resources that help with script writing ? |
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| Aaron | May 15 2005, 08:07 PM Post #3 |
A blast from the past.
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:blink: Im not in to horror eatehr or twisted moves for that matter but the story looks good if your in to that stuff. |
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| Lothlómendil | May 15 2005, 08:36 PM Post #4 |
Spam Queen
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Wasn't MDK, Murder Death Kill, on that movie with Stalone and Rodman where they were frozen in time. Yeah, I def remember that saying being Rodman's special still or whatever. 
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| Deleted User | May 15 2005, 08:40 PM Post #5 |
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Demolition Man is the movie you're thinking about. It starred Sylvester Stalone, Dennis Rodman, Sandra Bullock, Dennis Leary, the crrepy guy from Beetle Juice, and possibly someone else. good movie that was. Sandra Bullock was hot in that movie |
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| Zero Resistance-ZNS | May 15 2005, 09:40 PM Post #6 |
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Dosen't look scary. |
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| Chop Top-ZNS | May 16 2005, 03:24 AM Post #7 |
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not supposed to look or be scary, its just supposed to be twisted, name one horror film that is actually scary? |
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| Zero Resistance-ZNS | May 16 2005, 04:41 AM Post #8 |
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Telletubies: The Movie. Scary mullet man, Scary mullet. |
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| Isato | May 16 2005, 08:43 AM Post #9 |
The Squirrel Made Me Do It
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Wasnt Murder Death Kill, or MDK, the name of a Dreamcast game? Oh, and good script thing...pretty twisted...XD...I love it |
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| Deleted User | May 16 2005, 02:36 PM Post #10 |
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Actually MDK the original was released on the computer for Windows as well as the Playstation 1. MDK2 was released for both the Computer on the Windows platform as well as the Sega Dreamcast. MDK2: Armageddon was released on the Playstation 2 only. it was actually a quite fun and dark action/platformer for the maturer audiences, but didnt get alot of playtime sadly. >.< |
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| Francis | May 16 2005, 03:53 PM Post #11 |
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I remember playing MDK 2 on my brother's pc, a very fun game, with a lot of diversity... Anyway, on the script, it's looking quite good, keep working on making it more professional etc...  It's also quite amusing to see what the IF word filter does to it... 
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| Das | May 17 2005, 02:49 AM Post #12 |
Smells of rich mahogany
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Anyone got the cliff noted version?  
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| Devon Aster | May 17 2005, 02:52 AM Post #13 |
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Gotta second alamir's suggestion. If you want to make a real script, you need to check out some script writing books or google up some resources for television/movie screenwriters. What you have now is more chat format.
A proper copyright should include the word Copyright, the abbreviation Copr., or ©, plus the year and your name. For example: Copyright 2005 [your name] or © 2005 [your name] (you can make the © by pressing alt + 0169). For more info on copyrights, check out http://www.copyright.gov/ Also, if Twisted Pictures is looking at your script, you should be careful about releasing it online. Companies can get a little grouchy if you make the material available before they can decide if they want to put money into it  |
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